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Poetry by VarahilKirin




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February 22
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You climbed too high
in your own mouth.
When you fall
not even your Gods
can help you.
And i'll make sure
to be the one
to push you.
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sunneyfunneybunney Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is what I wish to say to the snobs in my life that I hate. Bravo
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SenselessApprentice Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, yeah, me too. 
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GimmsAlternative Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I find it rare to see darker poetry these days, but this one is awesome. :) It gives a sense of deserved hatred towards someone that has done wrong to you. To me, this poem speaks of someone who took advantage of you despite your kindness, and is now realizing that there is no hope for forgiveness. Very amazing piece. +fav 
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SenselessApprentice Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really glad you like it, thank you very much! You pretty much understand the poem. xD 
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GimmsAlternative Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. :) I am in love with poetry, and am a poet myself, so it is slightly easier to grasp emotionally inspired metaphors and analogies. :) If you'd like, you could check out some of mine and maybe get some ideas. 
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Metal-Raven-Feather Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
I quite like this one. Gave me dark tingly sense :D
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SenselessApprentice Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that means it's doing its job well. 
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